You can clearly see the author put a lot of care into details of this game. The renders are good, the writing is decent and the game have lot of potential.
It stills needs polishing like for instance when the models are standing the position seem a bit unnantural. Some writing lines can be simplified for a quicker read.
Apart from that the game is really good and very detailed. Keep up the good work!
On Android, there are 2 different apks, one in Portuguese and one in English, just download and install the English apk and you'll get it working. Take a better look at the list of downloadable files and you'll see it.
Na realidade, o Episódio 2 está a venda nessa mesma página por 5 dólares, deve dar em torno de 25 R$, se convertido. Caso queira deixar uma avaliação, clique nesse link.
Obrigado por jogar e agradecemos se puder deixar a avaliação positiva!
quick correction of the english text: when you give luna the bunny outfit, she tells you to turn around and close your eyes. That isn’t the mistake, the mistake is the main character’s question “Why i should do that?” the correct grammar is “Why should I do that?”
another thing: the 2rd floor should actually be 2nd floor.
When you have an immense amount of texts to review, some things end up going unnoticed. Thank you for your feedback, this will be fixed in the next version.
About the 2nd floor thing: In some buildings, there is a floor called the ground floor, which is at ground level, usually where the entrance door is. 2nd floor would be the 2nd floor above the ground, you know?
This game have one of the best render and visual I ever played. Really enjoyed the first episode and I gotta say disappointed that it was so short 😂
Also the new mechanic of interacting with the room is quite unique. I was confused at first because I turned off the tutorial but it was easy to adjust and get used to it.
Can't wait for the next episode dev. Really like this game.
Hi there. Just olayed yhrougj the first chapter and wanted to keave an honest review.
1. An excellent job in the visual design and the women are incredibly attractive. The sex scene looked good.
2. The translation and copy are incredibly poorly done. You should have someone else edit. Not just for improper translation (e.g. Luna saying "I'm going!" When the phrase in English is I'm coming.) As well as the awkward stilted conversations. The characters overstate everything they are doing and it's really distracting. (E.g. "Why are you here?" As asked by Priscilla. The protagonist replies "I am waiting here to talk to you and also I left my mobile here.) It just isn't how most people converse and then immediately after this Priscilla explains that she found the phone earlier and put it in his room. Really there's no need to explain this much about something the audience, or players, aren't asking about until you drew attention to it repeatedly. It makes the scene make less sense which is then countered by both characters in this scene saying "that makes sense" when it really doesn't.
3. The bartenders mini game is a great idea but on mobile I really can't read the labels well enough to do much more than guess which alcohol is which. Admittedly the bottles are clearly based off of specific brands so it didn't take that Kong to figure out but I still had trouble at times.
4. The choices don't really seem to matter that much. I personally don't really like the main character. I don't find his personality charming or funny, which might be related to the translation issues. That being said choosing to be a lecherous creep has 0 consequences in this episode, in fact not being creepy just means you see less content. As opposed to different content further down the road.
5. The transitions for the elevator are frustratingly long. Like I don't hate that you have to see him enter the elevator but the time between clicking the door and regaining control is about 45 seconds as I experienced it. It didn't add anything to the experience and honestly made me regret having to move between the bar and the hotel hallway.
6. Overall you clearly worked really hard on this and I don't say these things to discourage you, but rather to hopefully give you something to think about as you build the game from here. If you want to charge for this game or if you're looking to become a full time independent developer the quality of stuff you produce will need to increase significantly. I won't become a patron today, but I really hope some improvements are made and I'd happily support your development in the future.
Your feedback is apreciated, we'll take it into account in the production of future episodes.
Just a note about the elevator: This transition is skippable, just press enter if you're playing on the PC or click on the screen if you're playing on the mobile.
Hey Dev...I just played your game and i would say it's awesome from the renders right down to the animations...I mean the animations are so well optimised using less CPU cycles and all...My only query is regarding Luna and Veronika...I mean will they continue to volunteer as "prostitutes" to other male customers ??... Or you can limit them to "female" customers ??
Because they have become my favourites and seeing them with other male guys just gets that jealousy ticking like a time bomb in my heart ...
We're really glad that you enjoyed our game, we've tried our best.
We, as a development team, prefer not to talk about the future of individual characters in order not to spoil the experience for the other players.
What we can say is that each character will have their own role in the story and, yes, there will be female characters who will only be customers, but we'll keep further details as a secret for now.
We also don't want to break your heart, on the contrary, we want you to have fun with the game, but we understand that it may not please everyone and that's normal.
So if you feel that the story bothers you in any way, we respect your opinion and recommend looking for a game that best suits your tastes.
We hope that this bothering is minimal and that you continue to enjoy our game, but if you decide otherwise, we understand.
I am enjoying the story so far ... Th only thing I wanted to know whether you can make the two said characters (Luna and Veronika) avoid contact with the "male" customers further down the story ?? ...otherwise it's not an issue for me ... !!
Well, you have created something that players want as far game playabilty, shows you are dedicated, very few achieve this. I am going to try it out and if the story and chicks are as good as your setup, you can consider me a Patron, well done so far
Thank you so much for your compliments! We tried hard to create a game that everyone can enjoy, so we hope that you have the best experience with our game! ^^
Looking at the naked girls at the living in a brothel title card, I wonder if you make a nudist themed game taking place in the beach or forest camp where you play either male or female to sex with women, can you do that?
I see and I understand. Its a shame you wont make that because making that type of game with nice graphic like you did with the characters would take a long time eventhough your naked girls look neat that the nudity could have been used as a concept for a nudist themed game with adult content.
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You can clearly see the author put a lot of care into details of this game. The renders are good, the writing is decent and the game have lot of potential.
It stills needs polishing like for instance when the models are standing the position seem a bit unnantural. Some writing lines can be simplified for a quicker read.
Apart from that the game is really good and very detailed. Keep up the good work!
We appreciate your feedback and are glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for playing! ;)
Great game cant wait for the future
Thanks for playing, mate! ^^
Stay tuned to our pages to learn more about the development of upcoming episodes.
👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻The renders looks like so awesome.
We're glad that you liked it!
Thanks for playing our game! ^^
Bro is there any Sakura sex scene if there is so tell me how to unlock it pls 🥺
Not in this episode yet.
Her plot will be further developed in future episodes.
Ok thnk u bro 😀
what did you use to make your characters? also i love this gam
Hi, Ilikepie_girl1
The program used by us is called DAZ Studio, do a little research about it, it's a wondeful tool.
Thank you for playing our game! ^^
Como puedo cambiar el idioma en Android de portugués a inglés
Hi, Hirocode167
On Android, there are 2 different apks, one in Portuguese and one in English, just download and install the English apk and you'll get it working.
Take a better look at the list of downloadable files and you'll see it.
Thank you for playing!
Great game great animations
Thanks for playing our game, mate! ^^
Q jogo bom, fora a tradução pra português está ótima.
Obrigado, amigo. Ficamos felizes que tenha gostado. ^^
Se puder, avalie nosso jogo em 5 estrelas para ajudar a chegar em novos jogadores.
Um forte abraço!
Na realidade, o Episódio 2 está a venda nessa mesma página por 5 dólares, deve dar em torno de 25 R$, se convertido.
Caso queira deixar uma avaliação, clique nesse link.
Obrigado por jogar e agradecemos se puder deixar a avaliação positiva!
can you post the files onto mega instead of drive? too many people trying to view the drive, the site tells you to come back after traffic slows down
Hi, RaisedEyebrow!
Thank for warning us, the issue has now been resolved.
Please try to download again.
quick correction of the english text: when you give luna the bunny outfit, she tells you to turn around and close your eyes. That isn’t the mistake, the mistake is the main character’s question “Why i should do that?” the correct grammar is “Why should I do that?”
another thing: the 2rd floor should actually be 2nd floor.
When you have an immense amount of texts to review, some things end up going unnoticed. Thank you for your feedback, this will be fixed in the next version.
About the 2nd floor thing: In some buildings, there is a floor called the ground floor, which is at ground level, usually where the entrance door is.
2nd floor would be the 2nd floor above the ground, you know?
... he meant the r in the original "2rd floor" should be corrected to "2nd floor"
You're right!
We didn't notice that, we'll fix it in the next version.
Great game, i really enjoyed the story, the visuals are great and im really excited for episode 2!!
Hi, SMRS!
We're really glad that you enjoyed our game!
Actually, Episode 2 is already available as we decided to release it along with Episode 1.
To access it, simply pledge at least $5 here or on our Patreon page.
We hope you continue to enjoy our game.
If you can, also leave a 5 stars review here on Itch's page to help the game reach more players. ^^
Thank you very much!
I CANT FIND HOW TO HANG THE BAR SIGN I HAVE CLICKED ON EVERYTHING!
You have to hang it just above the bar's entrance door.
First, you should click here:
Then, you should click here:
If you get lost, we recommend you read the walkthrough, it's explained in detail there.
Best regards!
thanks I never noticed that part of that area. I thought it was useless honestly
Haha, no problem!
If you're playing on mobile, it can be a little hard to notice.
it’s a bad thing I wasn’t playing on mobile.
Hmm, I see
Maybe you didn't pay attention, there really is a lot of detail on the screen, it happens.
where i can find walkthrough please
You can download the walkthrough by pledging at least $5 on our Patreon.
it's no way can be free?!
It's a reward to our supporters.
You can have access to it if you bought the game at itch.io too.
Walkthrough please
This game have one of the best render and visual I ever played. Really enjoyed the first episode and I gotta say disappointed that it was so short 😂
Also the new mechanic of interacting with the room is quite unique. I was confused at first because I turned off the tutorial but it was easy to adjust and get used to it.
Can't wait for the next episode dev. Really like this game.
Hands down for this one.
Hi, Gwinblaide!
We're really glad that you liked our game!
It's still in its early versions, so there will be more content available in the future.
Stay tuned so you don't miss the release of the next updates! ^^
Hi there. Just olayed yhrougj the first chapter and wanted to keave an honest review.
1. An excellent job in the visual design and the women are incredibly attractive. The sex scene looked good.
2. The translation and copy are incredibly poorly done. You should have someone else edit. Not just for improper translation (e.g. Luna saying "I'm going!" When the phrase in English is I'm coming.) As well as the awkward stilted conversations. The characters overstate everything they are doing and it's really distracting. (E.g. "Why are you here?" As asked by Priscilla. The protagonist replies "I am waiting here to talk to you and also I left my mobile here.) It just isn't how most people converse and then immediately after this Priscilla explains that she found the phone earlier and put it in his room. Really there's no need to explain this much about something the audience, or players, aren't asking about until you drew attention to it repeatedly. It makes the scene make less sense which is then countered by both characters in this scene saying "that makes sense" when it really doesn't.
3. The bartenders mini game is a great idea but on mobile I really can't read the labels well enough to do much more than guess which alcohol is which. Admittedly the bottles are clearly based off of specific brands so it didn't take that Kong to figure out but I still had trouble at times.
4. The choices don't really seem to matter that much. I personally don't really like the main character. I don't find his personality charming or funny, which might be related to the translation issues. That being said choosing to be a lecherous creep has 0 consequences in this episode, in fact not being creepy just means you see less content. As opposed to different content further down the road.
5. The transitions for the elevator are frustratingly long. Like I don't hate that you have to see him enter the elevator but the time between clicking the door and regaining control is about 45 seconds as I experienced it. It didn't add anything to the experience and honestly made me regret having to move between the bar and the hotel hallway.
6. Overall you clearly worked really hard on this and I don't say these things to discourage you, but rather to hopefully give you something to think about as you build the game from here. If you want to charge for this game or if you're looking to become a full time independent developer the quality of stuff you produce will need to increase significantly. I won't become a patron today, but I really hope some improvements are made and I'd happily support your development in the future.
Hi, grimones!
Your feedback is apreciated, we'll take it into account in the production of future episodes.
Just a note about the elevator: This transition is skippable, just press enter if you're playing on the PC or click on the screen if you're playing on the mobile.
Best regards! ;)
Hey Dev...I just played your game and i would say it's awesome from the renders right down to the animations...I mean the animations are so well optimised using less CPU cycles and all...My only query is regarding Luna and Veronika...I mean will they continue to volunteer as "prostitutes" to other male customers ??... Or you can limit them to "female" customers ??
Because they have become my favourites and seeing them with other male guys just gets that jealousy ticking like a time bomb in my heart ...
Otherwise an awesome game !!!
Hi, deep4you!
We're really glad that you enjoyed our game, we've tried our best.
We, as a development team, prefer not to talk about the future of individual characters in order not to spoil the experience for the other players.
What we can say is that each character will have their own role in the story and, yes, there will be female characters who will only be customers, but we'll keep further details as a secret for now.
We also don't want to break your heart, on the contrary, we want you to have fun with the game, but we understand that it may not please everyone and that's normal.
So if you feel that the story bothers you in any way, we respect your opinion and recommend looking for a game that best suits your tastes.
We hope that this bothering is minimal and that you continue to enjoy our game, but if you decide otherwise, we understand.
Best regards! ;)
I am enjoying the story so far ... Th only thing I wanted to know whether you can make the two said characters (Luna and Veronika) avoid contact with the "male" customers further down the story ?? ...otherwise it's not an issue for me ... !!
We tested it and everything is working normally.
You just need to login on your Google account and the link will work.
Well, you have created something that players want as far game playabilty, shows you are dedicated, very few achieve this. I am going to try it out and if the story and chicks are as good as your setup, you can consider me a Patron, well done so far
Thank you so much for your compliments!
We tried hard to create a game that everyone can enjoy, so we hope that you have the best experience with our game! ^^
the download link for PC is not working
We checked and the link still works, but you need to be logged into your Google account to be able to download.
Thanks for warning!
Looking at the naked girls at the living in a brothel title card, I wonder if you make a nudist themed game taking place in the beach or forest camp where you play either male or female to sex with women, can you do that?
I could, but making a game is something that takes a lot of time, so I couldn't dedicate myself more to developing this one. XD
I see and I understand. Its a shame you wont make that because making that type of game with nice graphic like you did with the characters would take a long time eventhough your naked girls look neat that the nudity could have been used as a concept for a nudist themed game with adult content.
any femdom in this game and character name, please?
or dominating personality female character name
There's nothing lke this in the current version, at least.
But it may come to have in the next updates.
Beatrice and Julia have a more dominant profile, so you can expect that with the unfolding of these characters' plot.